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[Tori]

Name: Veronica Wheatley 

Age/birthday: 13 years of age  6th of October
Godly Parent: Aphrodite
Chosen Perk: Evade
Gender: Female
Sexual orientation: not interested at the moment
Weapon: Sword
Mortal Parent: Matthew Wheatley (Father)
Talents: Amazing at climbing.
Flaws: She is not very good at paying much attention to anything. Also she is very curious and cautious about everything. (That's why Jack has to drag her to everything fun)
Powers: None 
Biography: Veronica was a normal girl until just one little year ago. Then the world she knew around her was starting to change all because she knew who her mother finally was. It was not easy finding out who she was. She constantly nagged her father for information on her, what she was like, what he looked like. Finally when her father thought that she was ready to know. He told her. She was shocked she only knew of god existing way back when. She always though so at least until now. Veronica had arrived to this usual camp by her best friend in the world Jack bringing her here. 
Appearance: Veronica is very tall and slim. She is very flexible between changes or just plain old gymnastics. She wears just simple clothes so she is not to flashy. She loves her vans shoes the most though. She has long brown hair with dark, deep brown eyes. 
Personality: Veronica is very clumsy she cant trip over almost anything. That's why she does gymnastics so if she trips she can at least make it look cool. She is also very kind and sensitive towards others. Veronica can also be tough though. Especially when she is in battle. 
Other: She loves to look at herself in the mirror and give herself makeovers.
Password: Permclean

Face Claim: Rowan Blanchard 

Picture of Face: 

[Sorella]

Hey Tori! Great first start on creating Veronica and such but I just have a few things to address,

one: You have to pick ONE perk so you can go with either evade or heal in this instance.

Two: With her bio if you could please extend and add in how she got to camp, that'd be great!

three: If you could give one personality flaw that would be helpful, considering that the one you sort of gave was then fixed up with something else that she does.

four: You can't have an enchanted sword as a weapon of choice, you may just have a sword though.

Five: Just add another small flaw whether it be appearance wise or whatever to the flaw section.

Six: Rowan is 12 and looks a bit young to play 16, I think the oldest she could play is 14/15, so please edit that. (This is Rain speaking.)

After these are fix just mention in this topic that you fixed them and I or someone else will review them.

[Tori]

Thanks for the help!!

fixed!

[Tori]

Name: Logan Coleman
Age/birthday: 15 years old, Born on 23rd of November 
Godly Parent: 
Chosen Perk: Attack
Gender: Male
Sexual orientation: Interested
Weapon: Sword
Mortal Parent: Jackie Coleman
Talents: Logan is good at 
Flaws:
Powers: 
Biography: (At least 4 sentences)
Appearance: (At least 4 sentences)
Personality: (at least 4 sentences)
Other: 

Face Claim: Peyton Meyer

Picture of Face:

[Sorella]

Veronica is accepted~

However, regarding your work in progress character: we do not currently allow children of the Big 3 Gods (Zeus, Hades, Poseidon) except for very rare events and prizes. Moon won our first random draw, so she is currently the only user with a child of the Big 3.

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